View Full Version : Poetry Blog: only one month old
bjcarrierpoetry
07-04-2010, 09:16 AM
http://theincompleteworks.wordpress.com/
Only a month old. The poetry on the site is several years old however. I've decided to share with the world my writing. I'm just curious to see how I stand with the rest of the poets out there. So far my blog on it's one month anniversary has recieve 1100 views. I'm guessing that is pretty decent. I haven't had but one negative comment so far about the site. Please tell me what you think. Thank You.
veinglory
07-04-2010, 09:36 PM
Are you really interested in receiving a critique, because you seem to have decided you are happy with it as it is.
veinglory
07-06-2010, 07:04 AM
Or, of course, you might never come back here at all, and just want the link.
spamwarrior
07-06-2010, 07:25 AM
I'm not sure I like the black on red. The copyright notice is quite hard to read -- grey on red isn't generally a good idea. If you could change the grey to a different color, or change the blog background to make it more reader-friendly.
bjcarrierpoetry
07-17-2010, 07:13 AM
i love critique. yeah i can't change the colors without changing the whole theme.
spamwarrior
07-17-2010, 03:55 PM
Maybe you should change the whole theme, then, because it's really not easy at all to read. Even the black on red is somewhat annoying.
I thought this was a customizable theme, though, with color options?
Southpaw
07-18-2010, 04:33 AM
I don't mind the black on red so much, because it is bold though I did gloss over it at first. The right side is unreadable. It needs to have a background color. If you don't know how to edit your theme you should check out the wordpress help forums. WooThemes has tutorial on how to customize your theme.
bjcarrierpoetry
07-20-2010, 09:08 AM
can i have more feed back on my writing?
Southpaw
07-20-2010, 07:53 PM
Poetry is too subjective so I don't review it, sorry.
the bunny hugger
07-20-2010, 11:03 PM
You blog design seems fine to me but there are a few too many shades of red and pink to be completely harmonious to the ie (IMHO). For me the poetry is a bit generic.
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