RPMcMurphy
05-02-2010, 07:28 PM
The Katkan: A Journey Never Ends. It's about 65,000 words. Finished, and through a couple drafts thus far. It's an adventure story taking place in another world.
Anyway, here's a rough query:
Jade is, and has been her entire life, secluded and bounded within a remote, hidden village in which she and the rest of the Katkans have remained safe. She knows nothing of the outside world around her, but when she disastrously learns of the evil world beyond her walls, an inconceivable journey begins.
Jade's journey requires her to carry a supposed magical stone across the vast lands of a world desecrated by evil in hopes of reaching the Kingdom. The goal is to get the stone in the hands of the Great Wizard Eldrin before Evil infiltrates the Kingdom and controls the entire world. However, Jade is not alone. Along with a few assisting objects, she is accompanied by AuRee, a hand-sized creature known as a Treeden, and later, a heroic man named Croyle. Together, these three characters travel on a long and arduous quest, hoping to overcome incredible odds, menacing beasts, and terrifying creatures. Jade learns, nothing is as it seems.
Anyway, here's a rough query:
Jade is, and has been her entire life, secluded and bounded within a remote, hidden village in which she and the rest of the Katkans have remained safe. She knows nothing of the outside world around her, but when she disastrously learns of the evil world beyond her walls, an inconceivable journey begins.
Jade's journey requires her to carry a supposed magical stone across the vast lands of a world desecrated by evil in hopes of reaching the Kingdom. The goal is to get the stone in the hands of the Great Wizard Eldrin before Evil infiltrates the Kingdom and controls the entire world. However, Jade is not alone. Along with a few assisting objects, she is accompanied by AuRee, a hand-sized creature known as a Treeden, and later, a heroic man named Croyle. Together, these three characters travel on a long and arduous quest, hoping to overcome incredible odds, menacing beasts, and terrifying creatures. Jade learns, nothing is as it seems.