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So I've had this idea for a story/novel for a while now. I have written drafts and I cant figure out how I should introduce the main character. Like his age and his occupation. This is how I started:
'I need another vacation.' He sighed as his boss went on and on about how he could have been killed as she hugged him in a tight and unbreakable embrace.
"You'll kill him if he doesn't get air soon." A man came out of an office to the rescue. Daniel, the man, who was being hugged to death was relieved. 'My Savior' "We'll need Daniel alive for that big case he was assigned to." He walked back into his office. 'Scratch that. You evil son of a...' Finally he was let go.
Daniel....
Can anyone help?
How should he be introduced?
'I need another vacation.' He sighed as his boss went on and on about how he could have been killed as she hugged him in a tight and unbreakable embrace.
"You'll kill him if he doesn't get air soon." A man came out of an office to the rescue. Daniel, the man, who was being hugged to death was relieved. 'My Savior' "We'll need Daniel alive for that big case he was assigned to." He walked back into his office. 'Scratch that. You evil son of a...' Finally he was let go.
Daniel....
Can anyone help?
How should he be introduced?