Show Us How It's Done

You may want to post this in the SYW threads. It is password protected....vista....is the password.

You might ask a mod to transport this there.

Yes, the "Share Your Work" threads are at http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=26 with a password of "vista"

You also might consider breaking it into readable paragraphs if possible instead of one large block of text. Such large blocks are difficult to read, particularly in such a small font. You'll probably get more help if you do.

And welcome to AW!

Yup. As formatted, this text induces eyestrain. So I didn't get very far in before I gave up. Listen to all the wise people upthread.