Torn Between Two Novels

With two half finished novels, what should I do next?


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Chumplet

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I'm stuck. Majorly stuck.

I have two WIPs. Both are sitting at around 40K. Both have a setting in Spain. Both were started around the same time.

That's where the similarities end. I don't know which to pick up and finish. They pull at me while I'm falling asleep. They float in front of my eyes while I drive to work. But I don't move forward with either.

One is a romantic thriller set in Barcelona and the Pyrenees. A vacationing Canadian gets mixed up with a bunch of Basque freedom fighter wannabes. While helping a guy named Sendoa recover a stolen painting, she comes to grips with her own lost heritage. I have severe plot problems with this one, and need to do massive research about the ETA and corruption in Spanish politics.

The other is a women's fiction about two single parents who chance to meet thirty years after they had attended the same high school in Spain. She remembers him, but he doesn't at first remember her. The story is told in alternate POVs and time periods.

In his POV in present day, he supports her while she works to fight her son's cancer, since he had lost his wife to breast cancer.

With her point of view back in the 70s in Mallorca, Spain, she struggles with painful shyness while thrust in an alien culture with a poorly equipped mother and a busy, absent father, not to mention an obsession with a boy who doesn't know she's alive. This half of the book has a distinct YA flavour.

I don't know which novel to finish first. I don't know where my strengths lie. Thriller or Literary? Which will catch the attention of an agent or mainstream publisher?

If I pick one, will I be stuck with the genre and not allowed to explore the other?

Rant over.
 

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Plenty of writers write in more then one grene. Nora Roberts is the first example that springs to my mind, but I know there are others

As for which novel to start with, well, which do you feel more comfortable writing? Which is going to be the most enjoyable for you to write?
 

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Work on both of them. When you get tired of one, switch to the other. Also, as you progress, you might discover that one of them becomes the clear winner.

Good luck on whatever you decide!
 

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Flip a coin on which one to start with.

Write it until you get stuck.

Then write the other until you get stuck.

Then write the first one until you get stuck.

And so on, until you're finished.
 

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I'm stuck. Majorly stuck.

I have two WIPs. Both are sitting at around 40K. Both have a setting in Spain. Both were started around the same time.

That's where the similarities end. I don't know which to pick up and finish. They pull at me while I'm falling asleep. They float in front of my eyes while I drive to work. But I don't move forward with either.

One is a romantic thriller set in Barcelona and the Pyrenees. A vacationing Canadian gets mixed up with a bunch of Basque freedom fighter wannabes. While helping a guy named Sendoa recover a stolen painting, she comes to grips with her own lost heritage. I have severe plot problems with this one, and need to do massive research about the ETA and corruption in Spanish politics.

The other is a women's fiction about two single parents who chance to meet thirty years after they had attended the same high school in Spain. She remembers him, but he doesn't at first remember her. The story is told in alternate POVs and time periods.

In his POV in present day, he supports her while she works to fight her son's cancer, since he had lost his wife to breast cancer.

With her point of view back in the 70s in Mallorca, Spain, she struggles with painful shyness while thrust in an alien culture with a poorly equipped mother and a busy, absent father, not to mention an obsession with a boy who doesn't know she's alive. This half of the book has a distinct YA flavour.

I don't know which novel to finish first. I don't know where my strengths lie. Thriller or Literary? Which will catch the attention of an agent or mainstream publisher?

If I pick one, will I be stuck with the genre and not allowed to explore the other?

Rant over.

Send them both to me and I will tell you which one I want to continue reading the most.

It sounds like a joke...but I read one of your novels. I would do this if you would like.

I do really like Jim's advice though. Write one until you get stuck and then write the other until you get stuck. It's glorious having something to flip to if you get stuck on something else. That's why I like having multiple projects.

That's a real offer...whether it's helpful or not. (-;
 

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I think there are good suggestions here for you, but, personally, I'm drawn to the thriller. It may be because you mentioned needing to do research. On a political struggle. *sigh* That just sounds so yummy to me! And, while you say you have plot holes to contend with, the thriller just sounds more interesting to me. I mean freedom fighters! Stolen artwork! Mountains!
 

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Flip a coin on which one to start with.

Write it until you get stuck.

Then write the other until you get stuck.

Then write the first one until you get stuck.

And so on, until you're finished.

This.

There's no use stressing out about the opinions of agents or being stuck writing one genre until your novels are finished. Write now. Then rewrite. Then worry about publication.

Knitting is an excellent, meditative way to relieve stress (and one of my favorite hobbies). You could just knit until you stop stressing, then go back to your novels :)
 

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Damn, Chumplet!

How dare you make me think this hard this late at night!

They both sound really freaking interesting. :)

I'm sorry I'm no help.

WRITE AND PUBLISH BOTH NOW OKAY AND LET ME KNOW WHEN SO I CAN BUY THEM ON AMAZON K THANKS BYE>
 

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I voted for the romantic thriller because that sounds like way more fun to me, but working on them alternately sounds like a good plan.

I'll second the suggestion to take up knitting, too. I don't knit, but I do crochet and it's a lovely way to let your mind drift and mull over plot problems.
 

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Whichever you choose to do first and however you choose to do it, make sure you find a way to finish them both. Right now, you are holding nothing but "potential." You don't have stories, you have potential stories. From what you've written, I (we) really want to read those stories. You've whetted our reading appetites. But you are gypping us by holding back on finishing the stories.

I really don't care which one is done FIRST, I just want to see them both DONE, as in finished. I can't read and enjoy your work until then. Indulge me (us), please.
 

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Write the women's fic while you research the thriller.
 

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I vote for the women's fiction one, because that one seems to be easier to finish. It requires less research, and you can achieve closure there first. The genres aren't so drastically different that publishing one will preclude you from publishing the other. I say, go with the one that you can finish faster, start querying it, and then work on the second one. Your issue rings true to me, and I wish you luck!
 

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Whenever you sit down to write, choose whichever one strikes your muse that day. If neither (or both) do, flip a coin as suggested above. It doesn't matter, as long as you're writing. Whichever you finish first won't make you stuck in that category for your entire writing life, so finish 'em both.
 

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For me 40,000 words is always the sticking point. In each of my novels that's always been the most difficult point- That's always when I want to bail or be told my idea is a sure thing. It's happened each time so I know now to just keep going -- flip a coin and finish one to the end then let it sit before you edit or revise and then finish the other one...
 

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I only write one at a time to avoid the situation you're in.

Pick one and finish it.
 

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Flip a coin on which one to start with.

Write it until you get stuck.

Then write the other until you get stuck.

Then write the first one until you get stuck.

And so on, until you're finished.

Yep pretty much. I rarely ever work on one single project at any given time. You divide your time and make sure you finish both! Scraping both and starting something new is your very worst option. Besides, you've gotten this far, why suddenly fretting? You're half done.
 

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Your pitch for the thriller sounds more enthusiastic, which suggests that you might be more excited about it. If it requires research to move on, you could work on the other one while spending non-writing time researching the thriller.
 

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I voted for the romantic thriller because that one sounds better to me, but the advice about doing both seems practical.

Good luck to ya, whatever happens!
 
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