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skootertrsh666
04-11-2009, 07:50 PM
HIDING IN THE DARKNESS.....
SURROUNDED BY THE STENCH OF DECAYING YEARS OF PAIN.....
TORMENTED BY THE EVIL VOICES OF SHAME AND ANGER.....
MANY TORMENTED VOICES......
ALL MINE.....
LOATHING, HATRED, THOUGHTS OF SELF DESTRUCTION.....
ALL ARE MY COMPANIONS IN THE DARKNESS......
THEY ARE THE EVIL SPAWN OF SHAME......
HIDING IN THE DARKNESS.....
ABANDONED HERE.....
A CHILD......
NAKED, BLEEDING, AND ALONE.....
SHEDDING MY BLOODY TEARS OF SHAME.....
ABANDONED AMONG MY DEMONS.....
LEFT TO FEND....
LOST AND TOTALLY ALONE....
HIDING IN THE DARKNESS......
NO ONE TO HEAR MY TORTURED CRIES FOR HELP....
OR MY SOUL WRENCHING SOBS FOR TOMORROW.....
WHAT WILL IT BRING?
HIDING IN THE DARKNESS.......
AGAIN...
BLOODCURDLING SCREAMS PULLED FROM MY LIPS.....
LEFT AGAIN.....
NAKED, BLEEDING AND ALONE.....
I PULL AT MY FLESH WITH SOFT INFANT NAILS......
TRYING TO SCOUR AWAY THE INCESANT ITCH OF SHAME....
ALONE.....
ABANDONED....
FEELING THE RED HOT BLADE OF ANGER RIPPING THROUGH MY HEART......
WISHING WHAT NO CHILD SHOULD...
DEATH....
AN END TO IT ALL...
WALLED AWAY NOT CARING ....
ALONE.....
SEEKING LIGHT AND LOVE...
BUT NEVER CARING.....
JUST.......................
HIDING IN THE DARKNESS.......
AWAITING THE LIGHT.........
FEARING WHAT WILL COME IN THE LIGHT......
BUT WANTING....
NEEDING...
AWAKENING......
LOATHING THE DARKNESS......
NEVER HIDE IN THE DARKNESS......
NEVER AGAIN........

P.H.Delarran
04-11-2009, 10:30 PM
Hi Skooter, if you want a crit on this, it needs to be moved to Poetry Critique. You can p.m a mod (Trish) and she'll do that for you.

motormind
04-15-2009, 03:47 PM
Great. Now I'm scared to go to sleep at night.