creative ways to kill your characters in a fantasy.

Status
Not open for further replies.

Nivarion

Brony level >9000
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Sep 6, 2008
Messages
1,679
Reaction score
151
Location
texas
in a lot of series characters die and even if they don't die in the book, you know it happens eventually. but I'm starting to get tired all of the characters and MC's making it to the end, or dying in a battle. what are some creative ways you have thought of to kill your guys.

in mine, one of my tougher characters falls down a freshly mopped flight of stairs and breaks her neck, and after a half dozen battles when you think she is going to die, but makes it through.
 

Nalani Ashmore

Registered
Joined
Nov 8, 2007
Messages
32
Reaction score
3
Location
Arkansas
A complete random way to die for my characters is kill them ordinarily. I had one character trip and bust his head wide open on a rock in a fantasy story me and my cousin wrote.
 

katzenjammer

Reaching As He Falls
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Aug 15, 2008
Messages
69
Reaction score
12
Location
Witherspoth
Best death ever: Jump off the top of a very steep mountain, get struck by lightning on the way down, get impaled on spikes when you land, and then your body slides down into hot lava. Oh, and you have a heart attack, a stroke, and lupus on the way down.


What? I know I'd want to go that way.
 

Smiling Ted

Ah-HA!
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Nov 3, 2007
Messages
2,462
Reaction score
420
Location
The Great Wide Open
Best death ever: Jump off the top of a very steep mountain, get struck by lightning on the way down, get impaled on spikes when you land, and then your body slides down into hot lava. Oh, and you have a heart attack, a stroke, and lupus on the way down.


What? I know I'd want to go that way.

Really?
I'd like to go mid-coitus.
But hey, different strokes for different folks.
 

Darzian

To-to-to-ron-to
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Aug 15, 2008
Messages
2,070
Reaction score
1,123
Location
Canada
A hopeless disease. No cure. Endless suffering. Pain, agony, horror, hallucinations, fever, spasms, weight loss, death. Then corpse gets re-animated. (Inferi anyone?)
 

Aristophanes

Registered
Joined
Feb 7, 2008
Messages
24
Reaction score
2
a) dysentery.

b) they don't die in battle, but they get wounded. though the wound isn't that serious, since they lack antibiotics in the medical system of this pseudo-medieval world, the character dies of infection. gangrene, staph, etc.

c) trench foot.
 

SPMiller

Prodigiously Hanged
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Mar 30, 2008
Messages
11,525
Reaction score
1,988
Age
41
Location
Dallas
Website
seanpatrickmiller.com
a) dysentery.

b) they don't die in battle, but they get wounded. though the wound isn't that serious, since they lack antibiotics in the medical system of this pseudo-medieval world, the character dies of infection. gangrene, staph, etc.

c) trench foot.
b did happen in a prominent fantasy series.
 

CynicalRyan

Super Member
Registered
Joined
Aug 5, 2008
Messages
88
Reaction score
1
Location
Near Cologne, Germany
Website
twitter.com
in a lot of series characters die and even if they don't die in the book, you know it happens eventually. but I'm starting to get tired all of the characters and MC's making it to the end, or dying in a battle. what are some creative ways you have thought of to kill your guys.

While I haven't come that up yet in writing (scenes like this are being worked on by me in SF story, including getting shot, getting burned alive to good old spacing), here are some fantasy ideas:

- Drop a (draw) bridge on them. Often played for comedic effect in cartoons.
- Deadly traps in a dungeon (D&D has quite a few traps developed by professional writers and GMs). Spikes, poison, giant blades, snake pits.
- Magic. From the magic fireball to disintegration spells. Again, D&D has quite a few deadly spells, as does any RPG with fantastic elements (Shadowrun, Trinity, Aberrant, probably Rifts, too).
- Siege engines. From the ballista to the catapult to the siege tower (a variant of bridge-dropping). LotR: Return of the King (movie) has Gondor's defenders drop rocks on the orc army with predictable results with the help of trebuchets.
 

Troo

Super Member
Registered
Joined
Feb 28, 2007
Messages
258
Reaction score
46
Location
UK
Website
www.pantechnicon.net
Being a first-aider gives you lots and lots of ideas about how people can die. I was tempted to train as an EMT just to get even more ideas, but that could be seen as a little callous.

Instead I just pick my other half's ex-policeman brain. He's seen some nasties on the job!
 

Tachyon

Super Member
Registered
Joined
Feb 28, 2007
Messages
155
Reaction score
13
Location
Ontario, Canada
Website
tachyondecay.net
I admire series, such as A Song of Ice and Fire, in which the author makes it quite clear that no character is safe from death. However, I also admire series where the author goes out of his or her way to establish certain characters as "off limits" and then promptly kills one or all of these untouchable characters. When done in a manner that isn't too predictable, it's a nice surprise.

In science fiction, my favourite can be summed up like so: "I am a leaf on the wind. Watch how I--" and then a totally unexpected death that left many people surprised, angry, and confused.
 

ChaosTitan

Around
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Dec 8, 2005
Messages
15,463
Reaction score
2,886
Location
The not-so-distant future
Website
kellymeding.com
In science fiction, my favourite can be summed up like so: "I am a leaf on the wind. Watch how I--" and then a totally unexpected death that left many people surprised, angry, and confused.

Ah, but coupled with an earlier death, it made the final battle that much more intense. Because in the backs of our minds, we knew no one was actually safe from death.
 

Ageless Stranger

Dave Brubeck kicks your ass.
Super Member
Registered
Joined
May 17, 2007
Messages
1,020
Reaction score
331
Location
Dancing the dance of life. somewhere.
Die Hard 2, actually. An icicle right through the eye. Talk about brain freeze..

And the game Dungeon Siege has Ice Swords (dunno if they are called exactly that) as weapons.

Now that's what I call a classic action movie line.

I have one of my character's killed by a rampant obelisk. Does that count?
 
Status
Not open for further replies.