Anyone ever had a short story that just won't work? I've got this one short that I've been working on - a great concept and most of it flows well, but in the end it just doesn't "feel" right. I had submitted it to a couple of places but just withdrew it. If it's not working for me, I doubt it will work for anyone else. What's the solution? Put it away for a month or two until I can get a fresh perspective?