Beta or critter wanted :3

[Notus]

Hi,
I'm currently writing a fantasy novel and I'd just like some feedback about it, I've given it to friends and family to read with naught but vague sentiments in return @.@

If anyone is interested or would like to know more about it please pm me, I'd like pretty much any feedback, good, bad, lukewarm; I honestly don't mind, I'm just desperate for some form of idea about it.

Thanks to anyone and everyone in advance.

[dadburnett]

How about a few details ... how many pages so far, etc. Subject?

[Notus]

Well let me see,

It's 62/3 pages on Microsoft word, word count implies that I have roughly 36,000 words.

It's a book about duality, sin through grace and grace through sin. However It's not so apparent at the moment.

It's high fantasy but no zombies or vampires or the like, however I would hope that it could be seen somewhat dark.

It starts off as a journey of single-minded revenge by Nyx (I'm aware its a girls name but in this case it isn't) to avenge his hometown, traveling through the basin wherein the majority of the story takes place. Supporting characters include (most definitely clichéd) a mage, priestess, prince, royal knight, rogue, angel, seer, homunculus and various others.

I'm not very good at elaborating, sorry n.n"

If you would give me a few more specific questions and I'll be sure to give better answers.

[Kthrok]

sounds good ill try if ya want