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etihwmot
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Thank you for the comments - much appreciated. I had picked 'vehicle' deliberately, but I think 'cars' would do fine (I went with...
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He gave you his number (voluntarily, I assume) which indicates a willingness to have further contact. I'd rather meet someone for a...
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What could possibly go wrong?? 🤔 https://arstechnica.com/gadgets/2024/04/you-can-now-buy-a-flame-throwing-robot-dog-for-under-10000/
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I'm not a children's/mg reader or writer, so take my comments with a pinch of salt. I like this. Good, confident voice and sense of...
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etihwmot
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Thank you for the crit! Yes, St Mark's is his school, so you've got a good point about that name possibly being confusing. Voice-wise...
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Have you read DC comics? Lex Luthor believes he is working for the good of humanity. Scarecrow is a pure research scientist taken to...
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Your antagonists believe that they are the main characters. That doesn’t make them heroes. Whatever they’re doing, they have a reason...
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I love bad guy characters who are more well-rounded, and I love redemption stories. I usually write bad guys that are doing the right...
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I just want to throw something interesting into this conversation. I teach a course on Japanese culture, and one of the things discussed...
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Your antagonists believe that they are the main characters. That doesn’t make them heroes. Whatever they’re doing, they have a reason...
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It seems to me that a good way to keep an antagonist antagonizing is to give them good motivations for doing something absolutely...
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kaitie
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I just want to throw something interesting into this conversation. I teach a course on Japanese culture, and one of the things discussed...
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The US Senate passed a bill that combines the Ukraine, Israel, and Taiwan foreign aid packages. President Biden says he will sign it...
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I love bad guy characters who are more well-rounded, and I love redemption stories. I usually write bad guys that are doing the right...
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And it's good to bear in mind that when male characters do this it's not spun as "manipulative." It's him controlling the conversation...
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