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neandermagnon
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For me, I would need more than the description of the fall to get me engaged in this. I want to know where he is and why he fell. I...
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Woollybear
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The Next Circle of Hell, Vol. 2
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Okay, so I had the worst week of my writing life in memory. Three rejections from Big Five publishers and (much worse!) my agent doesn't...
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Woollybear
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If you have not heard of the idea of filtering, then I'd suggest considering removing the filtering. If you are filtering intentionally...
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neandermagnon
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I'm also inclined to suggest having the character introduced earlier on. These lines set a really nice vibe and they're well-written...
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Woollybear
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I did wonder if the color might mean something to the locals. I wonder if there is a different adjective that might accomplish the same...
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Woollybear
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I'm not sure why we need the color of the train. I feel the first sentence should really not waste a single word, and so I wonder why...
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tusenord
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March is shaping up to be a hell of a month. (Complaints coming.) First, I run into a man at the dog park who claims my dog bit his. The...
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Tocotin
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Hello! So... there is nothing special about the train? Not full, not empty, and not named? I agree with Lakey - I think this is smooth...
Yesterday at 11:11 PM
neandermagnon
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Wordle.
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Wordle 1,004 2/6 🟩🟨🟩🟨⬛ 🟩🟩🟩🟩🟩 Strands #16 “That’s fortunate” 🔵🔵🔵🟡 🔵🔵 🌎 Mar 19, 2024 🌍 🔥 3 | Avg. Guesses: 7.14 🟧🟧🟧🟥🟩 = 5...
Yesterday at 11:10 PM
neandermagnon
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Well, Russian news sites have egg on their face now, after running a story that Charles III has died - which the palace has firmly...
Yesterday at 10:32 PM
Sage
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Things like this are why it is best practice to hold off on spreading any news, no matter how juicy it sounds, until it is reported and...
Yesterday at 10:18 PM
kaitie
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Day 18 was 1,925 words. Came up a bit short today, and I can't really use tiredness as an excuse for my late session, since it's not...
Yesterday at 10:17 PM
kaitie
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1,113 for the day. Still behind where I would like to be, but taking what I can get. I think tomorrow's scene might be close to 2k if I...
Yesterday at 10:17 PM
kaitie
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This week: 1) Critted 3 SYW and 1 Query (first one) for fellow writers. 2) Word count on WIP is 900 words ahead of schedule...
Yesterday at 10:16 PM
kaitie
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Corner Bar Magazine Click on that and click on the link on the right, Yuleblot. It's a PDF, and my story is right up there on top...
Yesterday at 10:15 PM
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